who the hell said this is a bad game????? bro its a freaking almost perfect if you have contact with the creator do send him a message saying WE WANT the game to be completed please.
Go down some and you'll see some people who were very unhappy with this. Wish I did have something to contact him but he's gone from pretty much everything.
if you are reading this DEV, take your time and make this game what you want from a gamer to play it, don't give up please, and carry on. thank you for a wonderful game my fellow gamer.
Does anyone know any way I can get in contact with f_dot? I saw this game and am wondering if he would want to work on it again with me helping him out.
From what ive seen as ive looked around it seems like he has completely given up on it bc he felt too pressured and is longer making avns. I may be wrong but regardless this is a really good avn and personally i would very much like to see it continued
I know many stupid,dumb, totally clueless naive people but good sir you surpass every one of them,this MF dev was another one creating shitty avn,giving 2-3 early updates and then not realising anything for months,then go for rework or something and boom you got scammed and then these mfs moves on to creating NXT avn.
This avn was much more shitty,at least those other avn has something good in them to enjoy,from start this avn was a shit show, killing only good thing in game and letting bastards live,mc is greatest shit,who is worse then a pedophile,girls are slut who were tried to be shown as pure maiden,when that's not the case at all.
And story is pretty much fucked up,we are indeed saved,dude,and if you were his patreon,thank God for all the money you saved from this mf.
Dev said," I'm getting new job and unable to handle the pressure of creating avn anymore so i m leaving this avn,i m sorry folks"
Reality: "I don't know a damn thing about creating an avn,i just put my shit into an avn,i tried to make people stupid by giving effort in first realease,then i relaxed and start making shit to just say in future that I'm improving the avn and i will just sit and milk my naive patreons after that.Shit I'm getting more hate for my shitty avn then money i expected,i m Outta here fuck you cucks who supported me."
Thanks a lot loser dev for leaving this shit so called avn and pls don't go trying to make another in future at least do this good for all of us.
i Enjoyed it alot FDot and that ending though how are you going to leave us like that lol it was totally concerning and leaving us wanting more but overall i really enjoyed it and took my time going through it
Can't see a chapter 2 did you upload wrong file or am I missing something this v3.3 seems to be exactly the same as last version I downloaded which was 3.1?
You should come back man. Ignore the haters and keep going. I just want the mc and Olivia to have a kid together while he is with Mia and Ellie and Olivia in the end. This way they get the baby they wanted. I didn’t like how she didn’t wait for the mc but what’s done is done.
Dude, open up Patreon and make the packages available to paying people. I want to help with your work. I really liked the story and it's well developed. You're doing well.
You know what dev, i appologize not for writing crap not for saying bad, bit appologize to you for all of this as in sense, it doesn't matter to you, i am the way i m, i don't take shit has soft heart but built around rough Just play avn not for sex not story but to see some virtual unrealistic romance, love that doesn't exist in irl, that i never got or expect in future, but happy for others, i spread hate here just for one reason because i love it, i loved this avn story first part felt like a complete wholesome, a guy steal cars, live and have fun with his buddy, fell in love with a girl, even with their differences they come together and mc supported her when they were having their child, left everything behind fir her, after their daughter their life was complete and fulfilling, then shit hit for some gang conflict and money laundering, innocent lily died, i cried fir real many did, then you made another good thing that you made mc take revenge on those bastard not enough but something i never got in any other avn, did everything he could, and as last resort to save his remaining family his wife Olivia and daughter he left town for good, just to keep them save i felt like a complete story of a true hero a really great avn, i didn't wanted anything else except for just two more renders in that part 1,mc coming back hugging Olivia, and his daughter and then story end, it could be greatest best avn, short but best,
I said bad thing for part 2,i m sure you agree it wasn't good,but i compared it to part 1 felt distorted,felt betrayed,felt why i had to play this,i could have just forgotten it,and remained in my memory that it ended in part with mc returning to his family,i know a fantasy bit it turned too bad,i hated you for this,for making me felt depressed alomst,i blubber shit on you,i regret it,since you might have felt bad for it,but i realise it wasn't on you,it was your story,you could write the way you wants it,
It was me who fell in love with a virtual character,it's story its plot,it was me who should be blamed for just living in Fantasy since real life isnt like that but far way my broken heart wasn't your concern but i shifted on you for my mistake
I sincerely apologise ti you,i will never say anything to anyone,i love seeing perspective and don't judge but i did to you,it's your story buddy write the way you want not the way people like,cheer up i m not going to comment any shit anymore,anywhere,i m sorry again.
Now you got it bro,I know the feeling really!I felt that too because I fell in love with Lily's personality but as shit hit the fan worse things happened,but that's what it is right?what is life without pain?,what is life without drama?, isn't it how it's always been? that's how real life is!,not because it's just a VN is they can't show some emotions anymore,life isn't perfect why would a game be,what was the difference?,Plus the story having a sour start just make the ending sweeter!I know it man,trust me I've been playing VN's for 3 years I played more games that are worse,this one is nah it's just pretty minor for me.Just let the story go on bro don't let your emotions take over, that's what real men do.
yup you are right there are worse story that is written poorly it isn't even written badly just felt upset where gane took a complete 180 turn mc,a loving man who fought gangs alone for bringing justice to the murderer of her love,really handsome though, leaving family for their better life,to a douchebag looking old man,who is just whinning about his life,corrupting a Lil massesuer girl,perving over a bartender,who is his best friend neice,and lusting over a loli girl,and doesn't giving a damn how his wife lived these past years not caring for her,just bitching about his own problems.yeah it has its flaws but biggest one was story started as something and character with time become bad,and mc worst possible,not bad avn not dev fault but definitely not my type of story.
It's okay, I understand you guys, but I don't want to let this story stay only in the heroes and violence.
I want this story to bring out how the family faces different things, whether it's happiness or pain, and in the end they can resolve their misunderstanding and hatred and live together forever.
And at the end of the story, the past people MC, Olivia, Lucas all learn to really grow up.
This is a story of watching the characters grow and change.
Yeah i understand,everyone grows it's part of life,but hope that grow for something better in future especially mc since till now he has become worse than a gangster,to a rapist,to a pedophile,to a complete sick pycho who makes me puke to play as, hope he grows even 1% better
nope not yet,and not going to,i already have trauma,which was my fault to indulge myself into avn, may it become better or best avn in future i ain't playing it ever again.whatever you end up with story in future of this avn for me it ended mc returning to his family and they lived happily as in part 1 itself,for me it's end their and i m happy with it.
That's the thing on you bro,you just focused on the bad parts,you don't know how to move,how could you possibly enjoy it if it's still not in the interesting part but you're already giving it up,give it a chance c'mon,if you don't like this kind of story which is really good,try F.I.L.F then,maybe you'll find your "Perfect" Incest shit there.I mean everything been perfect so far.
Wow the game is just...I'm still sad about what happened to Lily but a great story comes with a sad intro😭😞,I...really love how the Dev put an excellent job on making some emotion and feelings mixed in the story,it feels like you're also there in the Novel,I knew how it felt to lose someone you loved...to try new things,to love,and start a family...But it also teach us how to be the different version of us,sometimes we're how we are,but sometimes things change us...and losing someone is...painful.
But anyways about the story please, please,please try it out and support the Dev,why would you listen to someone's opinion if you haven't try it yourself, don't get fooled plus I assure you guys that there's no NTR nor cheating,I don't know what you guys find bad in the game...I mean it's obvious as a clear ocean that Ellie is MC's daughter and who the hell really think that Olivia cheated???,eh?Focus to the dialogue like how they say it "try to keep you blood in your head and not in to the other" might mess your head if you know what I mean HAHAHA looks like someone though there's some NTR and he keeps on saying bad reviews about the game,I don't know what he's problem is but it's better not to pay attention to that,because it looks like he didn't understand the plot of the story.
And about Mia,who you guys think a "slut/whore/bitch" welp I think you got it all wrong,what her side show is her defensive mechanism as you see she show everyone she's tough and dependent,you'll think that she's not as innocent as before maybe you guys are right but?Are you sure that, it's really the case???She said she have a boyfriend,but did you see one??? Who get fooled by this shit because it's clearly fake!!!, she's also virgin and it's obvious that only she knows how to talk but also inexperienced, bruh you guys don't pay attention.
All you do is judge even though it's not yet revealed in the story if Ellie is Lucas daughter,plus there's no way like literally no way Olivia will let Lucas touch her,did you forget how irritated she gets every time Lucas is near,and in the latest chapter "IT IS REVEALED THAT LUCAS STILL LOVE OLIVIA BUT WHAT DID A GOOD FRIEND DID?" HE FUCKING FORGET ABOUT HIS FEELING FOR HER,WHY????,BECAUSE HE CARE FOR MC!!!HE CHOSE FRIENDSHIP OVER LOVE!!!,why can't you get that?Like really?!how stupid are you????
Wow,the game is really great I enjoyed playing it and the dialogue and story are pretty fun interesting and engaging,if you want to try it out just go for it and please READ THE DIALOGUES CAREFULLY,so you won't be an hardstuck bitch who keeps on replying to other review because he thought there's some NTR and CHEATING involved,what a dumbass looks like he didn't pay attention to the details and dialogues,I don't want to spoil anything but if you stupid hardnuts,think that Olivia cheated on MC you should go back to kinder maybe practice how to read and process some information properly,cause I don't think so that someone cheated on another nor another dick involve here.Oh just a friendly advice you can use some Walkthrough so you won't end up being dumb as shit.
i m sorry,i know everything has flaws,but you know what no need to repair them if they are part of your version of story no need to change anything you want to write fir me,or for anyone that diesnt matters,
Yeah but check for errors, spelling mistake renders missing for once in a while:)
I told you motherfuvker dev first learn to be honest,if you are delivering a shit fuck NTR cuck bullshit with looser mc story just tell about it,then don't make a crap build up NTR game just tell a line that girls are whore who will sleep with dead horse corpse,why do you even bother ti continue this shit? Just drop it motherfucker do something good in your useless life,learn to write good story you damn scoundrel.
yeah sorry for commenting i was frustrated to blubber shit on you,which isn't your problem
And as for NTR,it just on perspective i m prude, possesive so it's different for me,you won't get it,bit yeah even if it had NTR it wouldn't be much different,since mc isn't type who seems like love it care for anyone,a complete asshole, Olivia was raped by him not loved so i felt bad for her not for mc, except for lily i don't care who fucks whom in this avn.
My apologizes not trying to be rude to the creatot but does anyone know this game about this dad coming back to his 3 step daughters after he had to go to prison idk the name of it and its off my library
Another cuck bullshit,it's pandora box 2,mc wife forced him into swinging and then stopped him from fucking anything basically just cuckin, whereas herself whoring with every guy possible,one the man she was fucking,blamed mc for some fraud and mc was sentenced to jail,and that whore bitch of his wife blames him in part 1 and continue to be a 2 bucks cheat street whore and had two daughters,which are also sluts like her.and in pandora 2 mc returns,just a gane fir cucks like this one.
I can't understand why this mf dev even progressing with his shitty avn,it story goes from 90/100 to -1000/100 a literal piece of crap which changed our pov on that thought that more shitty games showcasing girls as whore and everyone piece of meat in NTR avns doesn't exist,but no u got this sit crap which is non NTR except for mc a whinning bitch his wife cheating on him and having baby with someone else,and mc own daughter a whore,like more than you will find in brothel,and i can keep going but no benifit this mf dev will neither change his shitty story or come out clean that this is a shit NTR cuckoldry crap avn.
I'm honestly surprised by how many people who played the game have not read between the lines in the dialogue to see that NTR is highly not likely to have happened. Chapter 0 really highlighted that case and its kind off funny how many people are jumping to NTR so quickly. Overall I really like the interactions between the MC and the girls. Can't wait for the next update to come out.
Yup interaction like forced loli shit,and how much of slut our sweet lily daughter is great discovery by talking to these two and jokes like your father fucking in this card damn good.wtf and reading lines,first line Olivia said to mc was due to age having difficulty in getting mans attention nowaday,is she a regular call girl or what? Who says these things to even their old make friends rather to his husband.just a whore no need to justify i never loved Olivia neither mc that's why he doesn't care,he just used her in past i cared for her but she could fuck whatever she wants but i don't like lack of choices such as living somewhere else option.
Someone read my reply, seriously though. It seemed fairly obvious to me that the MC impregnated Olivia before he left. I’m looking forward to seeing how the story develops and if the MC and his youngest daughter are going to find out the truth before they have sex. Let’s face it, his daughter is most likely going to end up pregnant if the relationship moves forward.
Do u seriously think,some fucked up shit like any kind of relationship between our daughter is possible,i will be blunt i don't want that whore to be my daughter even,all is that slut Olivia fault,why the fuck she raised her as a whore?and i don't want to be with that whore daughter any type of relationship,fuck her(oh that's her douchebag bf job) pfft everything is not already annoying then this dev who fucked up a good story even force you to do everything.as if game was any less fucked up
EXACTLY MY POINT, IT'S JUST SOME DUMB DUDE KEEPS ON FIGHTING HIS OPINION EVEN THOUGH IT DOESN'T MATTER,PLUS WHO THE HECK SAID THERE'S SOME NTR IN THE GAME?!
I don't understand what wrong with you bro? A good damn avn a good story a bit of tears fell in first part but dude you fucked the whole shit game basically he married Olivia before leaving for godsake and she immediately had a daughter with his best friend ,wtf is wrong with mc? He looks like and old douchebag, what he said was true it was 20 years yeah she could have been with others but just right after he left she slept with his friends and got pregnant that isn't NTR shit then what is it? You are forcing us to be with a loli character why? And our sweet lily is basically a whore throwing her sister on others and fucking with a crook .pfft i don't care for all these shitty character hell mc is far worst than all of these.u made everyone a piece of meat here.why? I don't care for all of these but why you have to kill sweet lily well thank God u did she is only nice thing left in this crazy shit NTR cuckoldry humiliating stupid avn i wouldn't have accepted her to be turned into piece of meat
Read between the lines, Olivia didn’t cheat on him. Both girls are his children. The horrible characters are Olivia and Lucas for not telling him right away.
i know no need to give damn spoiler(well technically not spoiler but definitely story became shit in this way,and she isn't same Olivia I knew of,mc was never present or nice even when he was with them he himself just used her so i don't care much for what's happening to him,he very much deserves since he is shit, but things forced mc looking like shit(he looked good in past) and worst part WTF Olivia raised our daughter as a slut? She changed herself and became a housewife type but made our sweet lily daughter a whore.i don't give damn for all character they are just wastage,only sweet thing in game was taken away and we only loved her.😭😭 Kill mc or anyone but plz bring lily
I don’t think the MC looks bad, and I don’t think he’s a horrible person, just an idiot. He was in another country, not a coma or another planet. Why does he not seem to understand the way the world works anymore??? Also yeah Lily being a slut doesn’t make sense. Olivia and Lucas are horrible people for not telling the MC and his other daughter the truth. Trust me NTR always annoys me since it happened to my best friend IRL. But I still think we should see how the story unfolds before we pass final judgment. Also Lucas has a niece WTF! I think the MC should have been aware if Lucas had siblings.
this avn is like one of those where every wrong thing could happen,happened story become shitty character became just meat with no feelings, everything seems to be forced and repetive only character we get attached to is dead,i m sad and happy to that she is dead,I couldn't have witnessed her ever becoming a whore - slut piece of meat like rest of thses game characters and definitely mc look like old crook douchebags you want to keep your daughter's away from,and he is a broke too or too poor(what i didn't get is his reason for even returning now,things have changed for bad and nothing is good in this damn city now for whom he came? Since he doesn't care for his wife and his daughter for him, stories best ending would have been 1 part only)
Best advice don't, just play version 1 and think that is end(i did felt good knowing resting happy soul of lily and raising as a good girl my daughter and not making her whore like Olivia did) because version 2 is shit just turned tides.
I really like ur story. Its just that i didn't like olivia with lucas😔.I know life suck.But without it,everything is ok.I really enjoy it 💓💓💓💓💓💓💓❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️.
Yeah maybe but if it happened in future we could have swallow it but right after our leaving she having a child with mc best friend isn't too much? Heck even when mc asked her to wait for him and married her basically she was mc wife not just lover and she cheated on him nothing could be more shit than that.thats NTR tag missing
I understand you man,i usually don't like this NTR type story.I really don't understand how fast Olivia sleep with mc's best friend, who she didn't even like what we saw. I hope writer give us good explanation about it.But no matter what explanation it will still hurt us.But,without this part, I really like the story.
I wish I could have said that lIke i liked other thing,but definitely this vn has something wrong in it i mean i felt i m playing another avn in version 2 version 1 was tear shedding for everyone but this one anger bringer,why we are forced loli? No choice to pursue which girl,we are taking advantage of massesuer girl ,we are harassing our friends bartender,our real daughter is a wierdo whore,and why the fuck mc looks this old and ugly? That makes sense why he is hated since he is good for nothing,he is just whinning rather than facing his situation and he is poorest guy i ever seen, WTF he was doing do 20 years(he acts most of the time like he is a hobo or begger.)
I think i understand you bro.I played some this type of games few times where u don't have choice but to agree. I am fully agree with u on mc character. Writer didn't think much for mc on chapter 0. I kinda feel rush on it. But you know,people have different taste ,i kinda like this type story.And i don't understand why u calling her loli??is she under 18? did i miss something?
well in intro it's said that mc came after 10 yrs so yup she is under 10 but avn about character age never make sense like a 45 year old woman look better than a 25 yrs old,how? Don't ask
❤️Thank you for ur reply.I do play some NTR game but the story is so emotional for me that it will really break my heart if it turn out to be NTR. So thank u.
nah i don't,and don't give a damn a story written by dev can be whatever the way he wants,just put write tags,like NTR (even if said not but make suspense like) loli,forced,humiliation,cuck(made to believe) a kinetic novel,choice arent there.but you know what i ain't commenting anymore i hate being like this bit i m straight forward type don't give 2 damn for crap pieces shits i move on.
O M G !!! poor POOR LILLY dame that's i sign of so DAMN good writing if you can almost bring a grown man to tears woowww, I'm not its spooler's so i wont say what happens but WOOWWW i never seen that coming !!! and its making it to my top 10 V.N.'s of over 500 odd and counting!!!
Actually at first i also read those comments and thout that game is not ok, with wierd story, anvoiable ntr, weak mc and stuff like this. But when i try it i really didn`t see non of that. I trully don`t understant how they all read the story, their words it is only assumptions aand pretty dumb one, i should say.
Story is good, animations and characters is also beautiful, pls keep it up when u have time, i wanna see the finish and will do it with pleasure!
But bruh why? You have to turn the table like this i mean just what mc said in story was correct 20 yrs is too much time, someone could be with someone else everyone das right to be happy,but WTF she basically thrown herself in mcs best friends arm right after he Left and had a daughter with him .Mc married her before leaving she was his wife that just NTR shit crap you deserve the hate,sorry but you really do
really loved this new episode! lol "you just dropped your brothers and sisters" you had me dying laughing with tears with all the comedy and stuff, keep it up!
damn dude, whats your problem, if you don't like other peoples stories and the work they put into it, THEN MAKE YOUR OWN and see if you can do what others can do,SMH your one of the people that likes to things for granted and probably a person that can't let others have nice things, i dare you to join the military and see how often you get time to have personal time and see if you'll take things for granted again
funny you say i served 3 yrs in military,a bit of coincidene? And i have exactly no problem with some story which is written nicely,bit see the chapter 0 and chapter 1 i felt like playing two different avn,one filled with love,desires, thrill, vengeance,rape in fantasy, pregnancy,a happy family, good looking character and all,and in second half i felt a douchebag mc who is jerk and looks like 60 yrs old when he was supposed to be 40 no one loves him(understandable) but missing cuck and NTR tags,forced loli,whoring mc real daughter, prostitutions,whinny mc crying over situation rather than facing,why sell something in form of something else , you could have made an crap story but seriously bro you also could see they are supposed to be two different avn.
i m not saying bad 😞 just felt sad that dev wasted a great avn,he forced us into loli and incest crap ,and he sold us a bad shit story in form of something else I m just trying to save others heart from being broken after playing this
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I really want it to continue. I can only hope that he will come back and finish this good work.
I want him to come back and continue the game, there are many people who want it to end.
same just finish it i hate cliff hangers
Waiting for next update....
Please Soon 🙏🙏🙏
He got a bit of bad criticism and unfortunately quit
who the hell said this is a bad game?????
bro its a freaking almost perfect
if you have contact with the creator do send him a message saying WE WANT the game to be completed please.
Go down some and you'll see some people who were very unhappy with this. Wish I did have something to contact him but he's gone from pretty much everything.
why the hell would they play an adult game and complain about it ??? if its not their cup of tea then don't drink it
if you are reading this DEV, take your time and make this game what you want from a gamer to play it, don't give up please, and carry on.
thank you for a wonderful game my fellow gamer.
Does anyone know any way I can get in contact with f_dot? I saw this game and am wondering if he would want to work on it again with me helping him out.
From what ive seen as ive looked around it seems like he has completely given up on it bc he felt too pressured and is longer making avns. I may be wrong but regardless this is a really good avn and personally i would very much like to see it continued
If you can find a way please let me know as I would also like to help out
Is this still an ongoing project or has he shut it down
I hate to say, but the Discord is gone as is his Patreon....
This had great potential, sorry to see it has been abandoned.
Guess the Elden Lady strook again....
Patreon is cracking down on incest. His subscribestar appears to still be active
I know there's a lot of assholes in the comments, but this truly is a great game and I do hope that you will continue it.
I know many stupid,dumb, totally clueless naive people but good sir you surpass every one of them,this MF dev was another one creating shitty avn,giving 2-3 early updates and then not realising anything for months,then go for rework or something and boom you got scammed and then these mfs moves on to creating NXT avn.
This avn was much more shitty,at least those other avn has something good in them to enjoy,from start this avn was a shit show, killing only good thing in game and letting bastards live,mc is greatest shit,who is worse then a pedophile,girls are slut who were tried to be shown as pure maiden,when that's not the case at all.
And story is pretty much fucked up,we are indeed saved,dude,and if you were his patreon,thank God for all the money you saved from this mf.
Dev said," I'm getting new job and unable to handle the pressure of creating avn anymore so i m leaving this avn,i m sorry folks"
Reality: "I don't know a damn thing about creating an avn,i just put my shit into an avn,i tried to make people stupid by giving effort in first realease,then i relaxed and start making shit to just say in future that I'm improving the avn and i will just sit and milk my naive patreons after that.Shit I'm getting more hate for my shitty avn then money i expected,i m Outta here fuck you cucks who supported me."
Thanks a lot loser dev for leaving this shit so called avn and pls don't go trying to make another in future at least do this good for all of us.
That's generally how it goes.
Will the new update roll out soon?? I really want to play it very badly
When is version 4.0 coming on here?
When will chapter 3 update come
any femdom in this game and character name, please?
or dominating personality female character name
i Enjoyed it alot FDot and that ending though how are you going to leave us like that lol it was totally concerning and leaving us wanting more but overall i really enjoyed it and took my time going through it
Can't see a chapter 2 did you upload wrong file or am I missing something this v3.3 seems to be exactly the same as last version I downloaded which was 3.1?
Where did you get your download link?,maybe it's a different one?
0.3.3 is a hotfix update to 0.3.1.
0.3 version is Chapter 2.
I see so when i go new game should there be ch0, ch1 and ch2? or is ch1 actually counted as Ch 2?
When you're through the Chapter 1 will automatically enter the Chapter 1.
You cannot select Chapter 2 in a new game.
You should come back man. Ignore the haters and keep going. I just want the mc and Olivia to have a kid together while he is with Mia and Ellie and Olivia in the end. This way they get the baby they wanted. I didn’t like how she didn’t wait for the mc but what’s done is done.
Hate to spoil it for you but if you read into the context clues you'll see that she did wait for him. Dev was dropping hints in the comments here.
man u should come back this game is so good compared to other novels
please come back and finish the story , we miss you .
Dude, open up Patreon and make the packages available to paying people. I want to help with your work. I really liked the story and it's well developed. You're doing well.
You know what dev, i appologize not for writing crap not for saying bad, bit appologize to you for all of this as in sense, it doesn't matter to you, i am the way i m, i don't take shit has soft heart but built around rough Just play avn not for sex not story but to see some virtual unrealistic romance, love that doesn't exist in irl, that i never got or expect in future, but happy for others, i spread hate here just for one reason because i love it, i loved this avn story first part felt like a complete wholesome, a guy steal cars, live and have fun with his buddy, fell in love with a girl, even with their differences they come together and mc supported her when they were having their child, left everything behind fir her, after their daughter their life was complete and fulfilling, then shit hit for some gang conflict and money laundering, innocent lily died, i cried fir real many did, then you made another good thing that you made mc take revenge on those bastard not enough but something i never got in any other avn, did everything he could, and as last resort to save his remaining family his wife Olivia and daughter he left town for good, just to keep them save i felt like a complete story of a true hero a really great avn, i didn't wanted anything else except for just two more renders in that part 1,mc coming back hugging Olivia, and his daughter and then story end, it could be greatest best avn, short but best,
I said bad thing for part 2,i m sure you agree it wasn't good,but i compared it to part 1 felt distorted,felt betrayed,felt why i had to play this,i could have just forgotten it,and remained in my memory that it ended in part with mc returning to his family,i know a fantasy bit it turned too bad,i hated you for this,for making me felt depressed alomst,i blubber shit on you,i regret it,since you might have felt bad for it,but i realise it wasn't on you,it was your story,you could write the way you wants it,
It was me who fell in love with a virtual character,it's story its plot,it was me who should be blamed for just living in Fantasy since real life isnt like that but far way my broken heart wasn't your concern but i shifted on you for my mistake
I sincerely apologise ti you,i will never say anything to anyone,i love seeing perspective and don't judge but i did to you,it's your story buddy write the way you want not the way people like,cheer up i m not going to comment any shit anymore,anywhere,i m sorry again.
Now you got it bro,I know the feeling really!I felt that too because I fell in love with Lily's personality but as shit hit the fan worse things happened,but that's what it is right?what is life without pain?,what is life without drama?, isn't it how it's always been? that's how real life is!,not because it's just a VN is they can't show some emotions anymore,life isn't perfect why would a game be,what was the difference?,Plus the story having a sour start just make the ending sweeter!I know it man,trust me I've been playing VN's for 3 years I played more games that are worse,this one is nah it's just pretty minor for me.Just let the story go on bro don't let your emotions take over, that's what real men do.
yup you are right there are worse story that is written poorly it isn't even written badly just felt upset where gane took a complete 180 turn mc,a loving man who fought gangs alone for bringing justice to the murderer of her love,really handsome though, leaving family for their better life,to a douchebag looking old man,who is just whinning about his life,corrupting a Lil massesuer girl,perving over a bartender,who is his best friend neice,and lusting over a loli girl,and doesn't giving a damn how his wife lived these past years not caring for her,just bitching about his own problems.yeah it has its flaws but biggest one was story started as something and character with time become bad,and mc worst possible,not bad avn not dev fault but definitely not my type of story.
It's okay, I understand you guys, but I don't want to let this story stay only in the heroes and violence.
I want this story to bring out how the family faces different things, whether it's happiness or pain, and in the end they can resolve their misunderstanding and hatred and live together forever.
And at the end of the story, the past people MC, Olivia, Lucas all learn to really grow up.
This is a story of watching the characters grow and change.
Yeah i understand,everyone grows it's part of life,but hope that grow for something better in future especially mc since till now he has become worse than a gangster,to a rapist,to a pedophile,to a complete sick pycho who makes me puke to play as, hope he grows even 1% better
Have you tried to play Chapter 2? I explained a lot about the inner workings of the MC there.
What I want to say in chapter 1 is that the MC has just returned to the city, and there are many people with familiar and unfamiliar mentalities.
nope not yet,and not going to,i already have trauma,which was my fault to indulge myself into avn, may it become better or best avn in future i ain't playing it ever again.whatever you end up with story in future of this avn for me it ended mc returning to his family and they lived happily as in part 1 itself,for me it's end their and i m happy with it.
That's the thing on you bro,you just focused on the bad parts,you don't know how to move,how could you possibly enjoy it if it's still not in the interesting part but you're already giving it up,give it a chance c'mon,if you don't like this kind of story which is really good,try F.I.L.F then,maybe you'll find your "Perfect" Incest shit there.I mean everything been perfect so far.
u r working on a new update right?? When will new update roll out?
5/5 Keep up the good work!!!
Wow the game is just...I'm still sad about what happened to Lily but a great story comes with a sad intro😭😞,I...really love how the Dev put an excellent job on making some emotion and feelings mixed in the story,it feels like you're also there in the Novel,I knew how it felt to lose someone you loved...to try new things,to love,and start a family...But it also teach us how to be the different version of us,sometimes we're how we are,but sometimes things change us...and losing someone is...painful.
But anyways about the story please, please,please try it out and support the Dev,why would you listen to someone's opinion if you haven't try it yourself, don't get fooled plus I assure you guys that there's no NTR nor cheating,I don't know what you guys find bad in the game...I mean it's obvious as a clear ocean that Ellie is MC's daughter and who the hell really think that Olivia cheated???,eh?Focus to the dialogue like how they say it "try to keep you blood in your head and not in to the other" might mess your head if you know what I mean HAHAHA looks like someone though there's some NTR and he keeps on saying bad reviews about the game,I don't know what he's problem is but it's better not to pay attention to that,because it looks like he didn't understand the plot of the story.
And about Mia,who you guys think a "slut/whore/bitch" welp I think you got it all wrong,what her side show is her defensive mechanism as you see she show everyone she's tough and dependent,you'll think that she's not as innocent as before maybe you guys are right but?Are you sure that, it's really the case???She said she have a boyfriend,but did you see one??? Who get fooled by this shit because it's clearly fake!!!, she's also virgin and it's obvious that only she knows how to talk but also inexperienced, bruh you guys don't pay attention.
Thank you... Well, a lot, very lot.
All you do is judge even though it's not yet revealed in the story if Ellie is Lucas daughter,plus there's no way like literally no way Olivia will let Lucas touch her,did you forget how irritated she gets every time Lucas is near,and in the latest chapter "IT IS REVEALED THAT LUCAS STILL LOVE OLIVIA BUT WHAT DID A GOOD FRIEND DID?" HE FUCKING FORGET ABOUT HIS FEELING FOR HER,WHY????,BECAUSE HE CARE FOR MC!!!HE CHOSE FRIENDSHIP OVER LOVE!!!,why can't you get that?Like really?!how stupid are you????
Wow,the game is really great I enjoyed playing it and the dialogue and story are pretty fun interesting and engaging,if you want to try it out just go for it and please READ THE DIALOGUES CAREFULLY,so you won't be an hardstuck bitch who keeps on replying to other review because he thought there's some NTR and CHEATING involved,what a dumbass looks like he didn't pay attention to the details and dialogues,I don't want to spoil anything but if you stupid hardnuts,think that Olivia cheated on MC you should go back to kinder maybe practice how to read and process some information properly,cause I don't think so that someone cheated on another nor another dick involve here.Oh just a friendly advice you can use some Walkthrough so you won't end up being dumb as shit.
Olivia is not with Lucas, Lucas is just pretending to play father, why does anyone think this is NTR? Does anyone have dyslexia?
Is that only thing wrong with this avn? Tell by your heart you know this shit has thousand more flaws.
Of course, it has flaws, I am not God, my friend.
And we can talk about them rationally.
i m sorry,i know everything has flaws,but you know what no need to repair them if they are part of your version of story no need to change anything you want to write fir me,or for anyone that diesnt matters,
Yeah but check for errors, spelling mistake renders missing for once in a while:)
I told you motherfuvker dev first learn to be honest,if you are delivering a shit fuck NTR cuck bullshit with looser mc story just tell about it,then don't make a crap build up NTR game just tell a line that girls are whore who will sleep with dead horse corpse,why do you even bother ti continue this shit? Just drop it motherfucker do something good in your useless life,learn to write good story you damn scoundrel.
Of course you have a choice, we are in a free country, but if you are not mature enough (either mentally or in age), I can't help you.
And there is no NTR in this novel.
yeah sorry for commenting i was frustrated to blubber shit on you,which isn't your problem
And as for NTR,it just on perspective i m prude, possesive so it's different for me,you won't get it,bit yeah even if it had NTR it wouldn't be much different,since mc isn't type who seems like love it care for anyone,a complete asshole, Olivia was raped by him not loved so i felt bad for her not for mc, except for lily i don't care who fucks whom in this avn.
All android downloads are down
Sorry, I was preparing an update and I accidentally just removed all the content from the web drive.
The patch is down on google :(
Sorry, I was preparing an update and I accidentally just removed all the content from the web drive.
Links are broken? Am I missing something?
"Sorry, the file you have requested does not exist.
Make sure that you have the correct URL and the file exists."
Sorry, I was preparing an update and I accidentally just removed all the content from the web drive.
My apologizes not trying to be rude to the creatot but does anyone know this game about this dad coming back to his 3 step daughters after he had to go to prison idk the name of it and its off my library
Another cuck bullshit,it's pandora box 2,mc wife forced him into swinging and then stopped him from fucking anything basically just cuckin, whereas herself whoring with every guy possible,one the man she was fucking,blamed mc for some fraud and mc was sentenced to jail,and that whore bitch of his wife blames him in part 1 and continue to be a 2 bucks cheat street whore and had two daughters,which are also sluts like her.and in pandora 2 mc returns,just a gane fir cucks like this one.
16 years later you might be thinking of. Nice tip, you can go into your "Things to Rate" Section to see games you've played and haven't rated
You should warn people this game is for cucks and people that like ntr shit, at least be honest that you are a cuck dev.
Exactly my thought just put a good damn tag of NTR if you are making a crap story of that,be honest looser cuck dev.
There is no NTR in this novel.
What makes you think there is NTR content?
the fuck are you talking about the game not having ntr, you are a liar lol,
the mc is not the only male that fuck/ have sex with the Li's.
There are other males that fuck the lis and that is ntr.
Any Idea about next update?
I can't understand why this mf dev even progressing with his shitty avn,it story goes from 90/100 to -1000/100 a literal piece of crap which changed our pov on that thought that more shitty games showcasing girls as whore and everyone piece of meat in NTR avns doesn't exist,but no u got this sit crap which is non NTR except for mc a whinning bitch his wife cheating on him and having baby with someone else,and mc own daughter a whore,like more than you will find in brothel,and i can keep going but no benifit this mf dev will neither change his shitty story or come out clean that this is a shit NTR cuckoldry crap avn.
Hello the new update is released,enjoooooy :>
I'm honestly surprised by how many people who played the game have not read between the lines in the dialogue to see that NTR is highly not likely to have happened. Chapter 0 really highlighted that case and its kind off funny how many people are jumping to NTR so quickly. Overall I really like the interactions between the MC and the girls. Can't wait for the next update to come out.
Yup interaction like forced loli shit,and how much of slut our sweet lily daughter is great discovery by talking to these two and jokes like your father fucking in this card damn good.wtf and reading lines,first line Olivia said to mc was due to age having difficulty in getting mans attention nowaday,is she a regular call girl or what? Who says these things to even their old make friends rather to his husband.just a whore no need to justify i never loved Olivia neither mc that's why he doesn't care,he just used her in past i cared for her but she could fuck whatever she wants but i don't like lack of choices such as living somewhere else option.
Someone read my reply, seriously though. It seemed fairly obvious to me that the MC impregnated Olivia before he left. I’m looking forward to seeing how the story develops and if the MC and his youngest daughter are going to find out the truth before they have sex. Let’s face it, his daughter is most likely going to end up pregnant if the relationship moves forward.
Do u seriously think,some fucked up shit like any kind of relationship between our daughter is possible,i will be blunt i don't want that whore to be my daughter even,all is that slut Olivia fault,why the fuck she raised her as a whore?and i don't want to be with that whore daughter any type of relationship,fuck her(oh that's her douchebag bf job) pfft everything is not already annoying then this dev who fucked up a good story even force you to do everything.as if game was any less fucked up
EXACTLY MY POINT, IT'S JUST SOME DUMB DUDE KEEPS ON FIGHTING HIS OPINION EVEN THOUGH IT DOESN'T MATTER,PLUS WHO THE HECK SAID THERE'S SOME NTR IN THE GAME?!
So did I. They confused me too.
I don't understand what wrong with you bro? A good damn avn a good story a bit of tears fell in first part but dude you fucked the whole shit game basically he married Olivia before leaving for godsake and she immediately had a daughter with his best friend ,wtf is wrong with mc? He looks like and old douchebag, what he said was true it was 20 years yeah she could have been with others but just right after he left she slept with his friends and got pregnant that isn't NTR shit then what is it? You are forcing us to be with a loli character why? And our sweet lily is basically a whore throwing her sister on others and fucking with a crook .pfft i don't care for all these shitty character hell mc is far worst than all of these.u made everyone a piece of meat here.why? I don't care for all of these but why you have to kill sweet lily well thank God u did she is only nice thing left in this crazy shit NTR cuckoldry humiliating stupid avn i wouldn't have accepted her to be turned into piece of meat
Read between the lines, Olivia didn’t cheat on him. Both girls are his children. The horrible characters are Olivia and Lucas for not telling him right away.
i know no need to give damn spoiler(well technically not spoiler but definitely story became shit in this way,and she isn't same Olivia I knew of,mc was never present or nice even when he was with them he himself just used her so i don't care much for what's happening to him,he very much deserves since he is shit, but things forced mc looking like shit(he looked good in past) and worst part WTF Olivia raised our daughter as a slut? She changed herself and became a housewife type but made our sweet lily daughter a whore.i don't give damn for all character they are just wastage,only sweet thing in game was taken away and we only loved her.😭😭 Kill mc or anyone but plz bring lily
I don’t think the MC looks bad, and I don’t think he’s a horrible person, just an idiot. He was in another country, not a coma or another planet. Why does he not seem to understand the way the world works anymore??? Also yeah Lily being a slut doesn’t make sense. Olivia and Lucas are horrible people for not telling the MC and his other daughter the truth. Trust me NTR always annoys me since it happened to my best friend IRL. But I still think we should see how the story unfolds before we pass final judgment. Also Lucas has a niece WTF! I think the MC should have been aware if Lucas had siblings.
this avn is like one of those where every wrong thing could happen,happened story become shitty character became just meat with no feelings, everything seems to be forced and repetive only character we get attached to is dead,i m sad and happy to that she is dead,I couldn't have witnessed her ever becoming a whore - slut piece of meat like rest of thses game characters and definitely mc look like old crook douchebags you want to keep your daughter's away from,and he is a broke too or too poor(what i didn't get is his reason for even returning now,things have changed for bad and nothing is good in this damn city now for whom he came? Since he doesn't care for his wife and his daughter for him, stories best ending would have been 1 part only)
Lucas is probably the most poor character in this story, he basically does everything for the other people.
Yeah I agree,Lucas been nothing but unselfish yet, what's with the hate?
Bro you need some fucking counseling Go see a fucking therapist he crazy ass bastard
hello! someone knows how to put the patch for Android?hola, alguien sabe como instalar el par
Best advice don't, just play version 1 and think that is end(i did felt good knowing resting happy soul of lily and raising as a good girl my daughter and not making her whore like Olivia did) because version 2 is shit just turned tides.
I really like ur story. Its just that i didn't like olivia with lucas😔.I know life suck.But without it,everything is ok.I really enjoy it 💓💓💓💓💓💓💓❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️.
Yeah maybe but if it happened in future we could have swallow it but right after our leaving she having a child with mc best friend isn't too much? Heck even when mc asked her to wait for him and married her basically she was mc wife not just lover and she cheated on him nothing could be more shit than that.thats NTR tag missing
I understand you man,i usually don't like this NTR type story.I really don't understand how fast Olivia sleep with mc's best friend, who she didn't even like what we saw. I hope writer give us good explanation about it.But no matter what explanation it will still hurt us.But,without this part, I really like the story.
I wish I could have said that lIke i liked other thing,but definitely this vn has something wrong in it i mean i felt i m playing another avn in version 2 version 1 was tear shedding for everyone but this one anger bringer,why we are forced loli? No choice to pursue which girl,we are taking advantage of massesuer girl ,we are harassing our friends bartender,our real daughter is a wierdo whore,and why the fuck mc looks this old and ugly? That makes sense why he is hated since he is good for nothing,he is just whinning rather than facing his situation and he is poorest guy i ever seen, WTF he was doing do 20 years(he acts most of the time like he is a hobo or begger.)
I think i understand you bro.I played some this type of games few times where u don't have choice but to agree. I am fully agree with u on mc character. Writer didn't think much for mc on chapter 0. I kinda feel rush on it. But you know,people have different taste ,i kinda like this type story.And i don't understand why u calling her loli??is she under 18? did i miss something?
well in intro it's said that mc came after 10 yrs so yup she is under 10 but avn about character age never make sense like a 45 year old woman look better than a 25 yrs old,how? Don't ask
Chapter 0 is telling the story of a youth, while from the Chapter 1 is telling the story of an adult.
All about the changes in the man (including psychology, perspective on things, responsibility.)
I can now only tell you is that this novel does not have NTR content, I do not know if you can understand.
❤️Thank you for ur reply.I do play some NTR game but the story is so emotional for me that it will really break my heart if it turn out to be NTR. So thank u.
PlZ keep it up.All the best❤️.
Very good game..All are perfect😭
Can't wait for upcoming stories😍
This is very good so far keep up the amazing work. 😁
Thank you.
You’re welcome. I can’t wait to see where the story will go from where you left it off at. 😁
Oh just mc will cry as whinny bitch as always and someone will fuck his girls ,typical NTR game with same stories
Wow what an Idea you have GREATFUCKINGCHAD,now can you stop on commenting bullshits?you dumbass who don't know how to understand a simple PLOT
nah i don't,and don't give a damn a story written by dev can be whatever the way he wants,just put write tags,like NTR (even if said not but make suspense like) loli,forced,humiliation,cuck(made to believe) a kinetic novel,choice arent there.but you know what i ain't commenting anymore i hate being like this bit i m straight forward type don't give 2 damn for crap pieces shits i move on.
Still waiting for the next man. I really cried when Lily died and it's enough to make a grown man cry, isn't it? Keep it up man love your story...
Thank you, I'm glad you like the novel.
O M G !!! poor POOR LILLY dame that's i sign of so DAMN good writing if you can almost bring a grown man to tears woowww, I'm not its spooler's so i wont say what happens but WOOWWW i never seen that coming !!! and its making it to my top 10 V.N.'s of over 500 odd and counting!!!
Thank you
Keep it up man. Love the story
Thank you.
I'm sorry, you have to install it yourself, if I include a patch, I'm afraid I won't be able to publish it.
This is one of the better games I played on this website looking forward to next update do you have a timetable you try to stick to regarding updates?
You've obviously either...
a.. Never played this AVN.
b.. It's the only one you've played..
If it's one of the "better" ones.
Thank you.
You should check the comments on f95, your latest update pissed off a great many people and you're losing players over it.
Yay... I saw those, but this is the story I wrote.
Hey, don`t listen them.
Actually at first i also read those comments and thout that game is not ok, with wierd story, anvoiable ntr, weak mc and stuff like this. But when i try it i really didn`t see non of that. I trully don`t understant how they all read the story, their words it is only assumptions aand pretty dumb one, i should say.
Story is good, animations and characters is also beautiful, pls keep it up when u have time, i wanna see the finish and will do it with pleasure!
But bruh why? You have to turn the table like this i mean just what mc said in story was correct 20 yrs is too much time, someone could be with someone else everyone das right to be happy,but WTF she basically thrown herself in mcs best friends arm right after he Left and had a daughter with him .Mc married her before leaving she was his wife that just NTR shit crap you deserve the hate,sorry but you really do
Timetable? Hmm... It's hard to say right now, because making this novel is still just a hobby of mine.
really loved this new episode! lol "you just dropped your brothers and sisters" you had me dying laughing with tears with all the comedy and stuff, keep it up!
Thank you.
Off course laugh your ass cuck ,the same joke meant that guy fucked your wife and had a daughter with her
damn dude, whats your problem, if you don't like other peoples stories and the work they put into it, THEN MAKE YOUR OWN and see if you can do what others can do,SMH your one of the people that likes to things for granted and probably a person that can't let others have nice things, i dare you to join the military and see how often you get time to have personal time and see if you'll take things for granted again
funny you say i served 3 yrs in military,a bit of coincidene? And i have exactly no problem with some story which is written nicely,bit see the chapter 0 and chapter 1 i felt like playing two different avn,one filled with love,desires, thrill, vengeance,rape in fantasy, pregnancy,a happy family, good looking character and all,and in second half i felt a douchebag mc who is jerk and looks like 60 yrs old when he was supposed to be 40 no one loves him(understandable) but missing cuck and NTR tags,forced loli,whoring mc real daughter, prostitutions,whinny mc crying over situation rather than facing,why sell something in form of something else , you could have made an crap story but seriously bro you also could see they are supposed to be two different avn.
i have no more to say, this is your own problem
i m not saying bad 😞 just felt sad that dev wasted a great avn,he forced us into loli and incest crap ,and he sold us a bad shit story in form of something else I m just trying to save others heart from being broken after playing this
Cj,you should play the new update again!, it's funny as hell HAHA I love the humor!